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Shirley Says E-Newsletter Issue 31
May 2005

Dear Reader,

It's it's been good to meet some old and new friends at my recent public workshops - check out some photos here. I also enjoyed my one-day workshop with staff of Degussa SEA Pte Ltd. I'm looking forward to my second two-day workshop with ABN-AMRO Bank in May, as well as making some more new friends in public workshops.

If you want to join the growing number of companies who recognise the importance of improving the written communication skills of their staff, please e-mail me at shirley@shirleytaylor.com and we can discuss how I can help you.

Enjoy May, and I'll see you again in June.

Shirley

In this issue
  • May News from Shirley
  • Communication - the lifeblood of your organisation
  • A-Z of Bloopers, Blunders, Common errors and Clichés
  • May quick quiz
  • That pesky apostrophe!
  • And finally ...

  • Communication - the lifeblood of your organisation

    Speaking and writing are the two main ways of communicating, of sharing ideas and conducting business. Writing in particular has become the main form of business communication throughout the world. Most employers would agree that two of the most crucial skills they look for in hiring new staff and in training current staff are the ability to think critically and to express themselves clearly both orally and in writing. Doesn't this confirm the importance of communication?

    Communication is, and it always will be, the lifeblood of any organisation, and just like any other endeavour, the more you put into it, the more you'll get back!

    More and more people are realising how important it is to improve their writing skills, just like this group of lovely participants at my two-day 'Power Up Your Business Writing Skills' workshop in April.

    Thanks to these participants for their feedback:

    Joan Toh, Executive from SembCorp Industries: "I enjoyed Shirley's workshop - all of it. I hope that I will not make the same writing mistakes ever!"

    Dawn Ee, PA from Singapore Sports Council: "The humorous and knowledgeable trainer makes the workshop enjoyable and informative."

    Catherine Hum, Associate Director from Wellington International: "Very interesting & lively workshop. I've learned a lot from this workshop and will share it with friends and colleagues."

    Why not join me for my next two-day Power Up Your Business Writing workshop? It will be held at the Holiday Inn Park View on 9-10 June 2005. Contact Sam Loo at 63762018 for more details.

    If any of my past workshop participants have any feedback on how they are coping back in the office, I'd be happy to hear from you. By using the tried and tested techniques, tips and guidelines in my workshop, as well as in my books, I hope you will enjoy learning to communicate your ideas more effectively and professionally. In doing so, you can only enhance your career as well as the success of your organisation.


    A-Z of Bloopers, Blunders, Common errors and Clichés

    Thanks to those of you who have written to say how much you like my A-Z of Bloopers, Blunders, Common errors and Clichés. Here are some more for you:

    Gobbledygook
    Gobbledygook is writing that is bombastic, pretentious, stuffy and long-winded. It is writing that attempts to sound official or formal. Take a look at this letter from an accountant - it is full of gobbledygook.

    Goodself
    This is so old-fashioned. Please do not use this word in your writing.

    Grammar
    Too many people still spell this word as grammer. There is no such word as grammer - it's grammar.

    Hereby and Herewith
    These are old-fashioned clichÈs that we should not use in the 21st Century.

    However
    However - when the meaning is 'nevertheless' - can be used at the beginning, in the middle, or at the end of a sentence. It's a good word to help you illustrate a contrast in thought. Note that commas are usually needed.

    For example:
    I rarely work on weekends. However, last weekend was an exception.
    I rarely work on weekends. Last weekend, however, was an exception.
    I rarely work on weekends. Last weekend was an exception, however.

    When you use however to mean 'in whatever way' or 'to whatever extent', note that it is one word, not two:

    However you advise her, she will do exactly as she pleases.


    May quick quiz

    I thought I'd introduce a quick quiz this month - something to test your knowledge of language. I'll include the answers next month. Let me know if you like this feature, and it could become regular.

    This month's quiz involves similar words -words that sound and/or are spelled very similarly, which are often confused. See if you can spot the correct words from those shown in brackets:

    1. Ten years have ....... since the two companies merged. (past/passed)
    2. When you take a problem to your manager, be sure to offer an ....... solution.
      (alternate/alternative)
    3. Good teachers should try to ....... answers from their students, rather than telling them everything. (illicit/elicit)
    4. Perhaps you can ask the chairman to ....... the decision until the next meeting. (defer/deter)
    5. When the company received a lot of adverse publicity, the staff ....... was very low. (moral/morale)
    6. Always ...... that you proofread your documents carefully before sending them out. (insure/ensure)
    7. A good employee will play a vital ....... in the company's success. (roll/role)
    8. Mark has always ....... to being manager of his own company. (aspired/inspired)
    9. The CEO's speech had a great ....... on staff motivation. (affect/effect)
    10. Please let me have your expert ....... on this issue. (advice/advise)


    That pesky apostrophe!

    So many of my workshop participants ask me for clarification on where to put that pesky apostrophe.

    Is it childrens' clothes or children's clothes?
    Is it Iris' report or Iris's report?
    Is it CEO's office or CEOs office?
    Is it PC's or PCs?
    Is it it's or its?

    If the apostrophe has you scratching your head, you will be fascinated by an article written by Tim North, which he has very kindly given permission for me to include on my website. I know it will help you, so do check it out.


    And finally ...

    Please write to me with any feedback you have, or tell me what you want to see in my e-newsletter. I'd love to hear from you. Write to me at shirley@shirleytaylor.com.

    Make May a merry one, and I'll see you in June!!!

    Shirley

    PPS: You may reprint this newsletter or forward it to your customers and colleagues. However please keep this copyright and contact information intact:

    Copyright Shirley Taylor 2005. Shirley Taylor is author of several popular books on effective communication and business writing. She lives in Singapore and works as an international trainer, seminar leader, professional writer and conference speaker.


    May News from Shirley

    THREE GOOD FRIENDS

    It's always good to get together with other trainers, to share ideas, exchange views, and generally just catch up on news. Here I am with two very good friends -
    David Freemantle
    and Ricky Lien.
    David is a trainer and best-selling author of 14 business books on the subjects of customer service, leadership and motivation. Check out his website at www.superboss.co.uk.

    Ricky specialises in training on leadership skills, communication and self-motivation. Check out his website at www.mindsetmedia.com.sg.


    THANKS TO STELLA FROM DEGUSSA

    Thanks to Stella Tan, HR/Admin Manager of Degussa SEA Pte Ltd, for taking the time to write to me after my recent one-day workshop for Degussa in Singapore. Here is what Stella said:

    "I am writing to say how much we enjoyed your workshop yesterday. We are really impressed by your humorous, enthusiastic and cheerful way of teaching. Our employees' feedback on your training is very positive."

    Thanks Stella, I'm glad you all enjoyed it.
    Please click here to read more testimonials.


    SHIRLEY'S 2005 SCHEDULE
    OF PUBLIC WORKSHOPS

    Here are the dates of my public workshops in Singapore for 2005. To download the pdf flier, please click on the links. For further details please call
    Sam Loo from
    Learner's Choice
    on 63762018.

    Power Up Your Business Writing Skills
    9-10 June
    24-25 August
    19-20 October
    6-7 December

    Success Skills for Secretaries
    & Support Staff

    6 September
    9 November

    Energise your E-mail Writing Skills
    11 May
    21 September
    16 November

    Quick Links...

    Testimonials on Shirley's workshops

    Shirley's workshops and seminars

    Shirley's articles on learning

    An interview with Shirley

    Shirley's books

    Shirley's photo gallery

    The communications guru from down under - Ricky Lien



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