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Dear Reader,
It's it's been good to meet some old and new friends
at my recent public workshops - check out some photos here. I also
enjoyed my one-day workshop with staff of Degussa
SEA Pte Ltd. I'm looking forward to my second
two-day workshop with ABN-AMRO Bank in May, as
well as making some more new friends in public
workshops.
If you want to join the growing number of companies
who recognise the importance of improving the
written communication skills of their staff, please
e-mail me at
shirley@shirleytaylor.com and we can
discuss how I can help you.
Enjoy May, and I'll see you again in June.
Shirley
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Speaking and writing are the two main ways of
communicating, of sharing ideas and conducting
business. Writing in particular has become the main
form of business communication throughout the
world. Most employers would agree that two of the
most crucial skills they look for in hiring new staff and
in training current staff are the ability to think
critically and to express themselves clearly both
orally and in writing. Doesn't this confirm the
importance of communication?
Communication is, and it always will be, the lifeblood
of any organisation, and just like any other
endeavour, the more you put into it, the more you'll
get back!
More and more people are realising how important it
is to improve their writing skills, just like this group of
lovely participants at my two-day 'Power Up Your
Business Writing Skills' workshop in April.
Thanks to
these participants for their feedback:
Joan Toh, Executive from SembCorp Industries:
"I enjoyed Shirley's workshop - all
of it. I hope that I will not make the same writing
mistakes ever!"
Dawn Ee, PA from Singapore Sports Council: "The
humorous and knowledgeable
trainer makes the workshop enjoyable and
informative."
Catherine Hum, Associate Director from Wellington
International: "Very interesting & lively
workshop. I've learned a lot from this workshop and
will share it with friends and colleagues."
Why not join me for my next two-day Power Up Your Business Writing
workshop? It will be held at the
Holiday Inn Park View on 9-10 June 2005. Contact
Sam Loo at 63762018 for more details.
If any of my past workshop participants have any
feedback on how they are coping back in the office,
I'd be happy to hear from you. By using the tried
and tested techniques, tips and guidelines in my
workshop, as well as in my books, I hope you will
enjoy learning to communicate your ideas more
effectively and professionally. In doing so, you can
only enhance your career as well as the success of
your organisation.
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| A-Z of Bloopers, Blunders, Common errors and Clichés |
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Thanks to those of you who have written to say how
much you like my A-Z of Bloopers, Blunders, Common
errors and Clichés. Here are some more for
you:
Gobbledygook
Gobbledygook is writing that is
bombastic, pretentious, stuffy and long-winded. It is
writing that attempts to sound official or formal.
Take a look at this
letter from an accountant - it is
full of gobbledygook.
Goodself
This is so old-fashioned. Please do not use this word
in your writing.
Grammar
Too many people still spell this word as
grammer. There is no such word as
grammer - it's grammar.
Hereby and Herewith
These are old-fashioned clichÈs that we should not
use in the 21st Century.
However
However - when the meaning
is 'nevertheless' - can be used at the beginning, in
the middle, or at the end of a sentence. It's a good
word to help you illustrate a contrast in thought.
Note that commas are usually needed.
For example:
I rarely work on weekends. However, last
weekend
was an exception.
I rarely work on weekends. Last weekend, however,
was an exception.
I rarely work on weekends. Last weekend was an
exception, however.
When you use however to mean 'in whatever
way' or 'to whatever extent', note that it is one
word, not two:
However you advise her, she will do exactly as
she
pleases.
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| May quick quiz |
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I thought I'd introduce a quick quiz this month -
something to test your knowledge of language. I'll
include the answers next month. Let me know if you
like this feature, and it could become regular.
This month's quiz involves similar words -words that
sound and/or are spelled very similarly, which are
often confused. See if you can spot the correct
words from those shown in brackets:
- Ten years have ....... since the two companies
merged. (past/passed)
- When you take a problem to your manager, be
sure to offer an ....... solution.
(alternate/alternative)
- Good teachers should try to ....... answers from
their students, rather than telling them everything.
(illicit/elicit)
- Perhaps you can ask the chairman to ....... the
decision until the next meeting. (defer/deter)
- When the company received a lot of adverse
publicity, the staff ....... was very low. (moral/morale)
- Always ...... that you proofread your documents
carefully before sending them out. (insure/ensure)
- A good employee will play a vital ....... in the
company's success. (roll/role)
- Mark has always ....... to being manager of his
own company. (aspired/inspired)
- The CEO's speech had a great ....... on staff
motivation. (affect/effect)
- Please let me have your expert ....... on this
issue. (advice/advise)
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| That pesky apostrophe! |
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So many of my workshop participants ask me for
clarification on where to put that pesky apostrophe.
Is it childrens' clothes or children's clothes?
Is it Iris' report or Iris's report?
Is it CEO's office or CEOs office?
Is it PC's or PCs?
Is it it's or its?
If the apostrophe has you scratching your head, you
will be fascinated by an article written by Tim
North,
which he has very kindly given permission for me to
include on my website. I know it will help you, so do
check it out.
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Please write to me with any feedback you have, or
tell me what you want to see in my e-newsletter. I'd
love to hear from you. Write to me at
shirley@shirleytaylor.com.
Make May a merry one, and I'll see you in June!!!
Shirley
PPS: You may reprint this newsletter or forward it to
your customers and colleagues. However please
keep this copyright and contact information
intact:
Copyright Shirley Taylor 2005. Shirley Taylor
is author of several popular books on effective
communication and business writing. She lives in
Singapore and works as an international trainer,
seminar leader, professional writer and conference
speaker.
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May News from Shirley |
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THREE GOOD FRIENDS
It's always good to get together with other trainers,
to share ideas, exchange views, and generally just
catch up on news. Here I am with two very good
friends -
David Freemantle and
Ricky Lien. David is a
trainer and best-selling author of 14 business books
on the subjects of customer service, leadership and
motivation. Check out his website at
www.superboss.co.uk.
Ricky specialises in training on leadership skills,
communication and self-motivation. Check out his
website at
www.mindsetmedia.com.sg.
THANKS TO STELLA FROM
DEGUSSA
Thanks to Stella Tan, HR/Admin Manager of
Degussa SEA Pte Ltd, for taking the time to write to
me after my recent one-day workshop for Degussa in
Singapore. Here is what Stella said:
"I am writing to say how much we enjoyed
your workshop yesterday. We are really impressed by
your humorous, enthusiastic and cheerful way of
teaching. Our employees' feedback on your
training is very positive."
Thanks Stella, I'm glad you all enjoyed it.
Please click here to read more testimonials.
SHIRLEY'S 2005 SCHEDULE OF
PUBLIC WORKSHOPS
Here are the dates of my public workshops in
Singapore for 2005. To download the pdf flier,
please click on the links. For further details please
call Sam Loo from Learner's Choice on
63762018.
Power Up Your Business Writing
Skills
9-10 June
24-25 August
19-20 October
6-7 December
Success Skills for Secretaries &
Support Staff
6 September
9 November
Energise your E-mail Writing
Skills
11 May
21 September
16 November
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