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Shirley Says E-Newsletter Issue 30
April 2005

Dear Reader,

First of all, many apologies for being so late with my newsletter this month. I've had to fly back to the UK because my Mum has been quite poorly, so unfortunately lots of things had to take second place.

I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend the Malaysian Secretaries Conference in Kuala Lumpur next week. I always enjoy this annual conference and have been looking forward to it. However, some things are out of our control, and I'm so sorry I had to pull out this year because of my unexpected UK trip to see my Mum. My best wishes to the organisers for much success with this year's conference, and hopefully I'll be back with you at next year's conference.

Spring-time in England is very cold but we had some excitement this weekend with the royal wedding. I'm hoping to head back to Singapore in a few days time, so will be back in action very soon.

Have a great month, and I'll be back in May.

Shirley

In this issue
  • April News from Shirley
  • Happy Secretaries Week
  • Confused? We need to KISS more!
  • A-Z of Bloopers, Blunders, Common errors and Clichés
  • Join one of my public workshops
  • Last but not least

  • Happy Secretaries Week

    "In today's marketplace there is no such thing as standing still. You are either moving ahead or falling behind." So says Jo Peay, International President of the International Association of Administrative Professionals. She has written a very interesting article that appears in OfficePro magazine, and you can check out the pdf flier of that article here.

    First organised and celebrated in 1952, Admin Professionals Week, as it is now known, has grown to be one of the world's most celebrated workplace observances. It provides a great opportunity for the business world to recognise and show appreciation for the invaluable business contributions of office support staff.

    The IAAP uses this international publicity opportunity to increase awareness of admin professionals contributions in the workplace and to promote the value of continuing education and training.

    Learn more about Admin Professionals week by visiting the very interesting and comprehensive website of the the International Association of Administrative Professionals.

    If you are a secretary or admin support staff, why not ask your boss to treat you for secretaries week? Join my next public workshop Success Skills for Secretaries and Support Staff in Singapore on 4 May. Check out the pdf flier here, or call Sam Loo on 6376 2018 for further details.


    Confused? We need to KISS more!

    Jargon can seriously get in the way of business if no-one understands what people are talking about, or what they are writing about!

    I'm sure you have often come across messages that leave you feeling very confused, right? This problem happens when people use pompous or long-winded wording and phrasing to try to impress rather than to communicate. Yet really, the end result is that they do neither of these things!

    Using jargon can result in one of two things - the reader will get bored and stop reading, or will spend a great deal of time trying to figure out what you meant four sentences ago!

    Do you know any writers who sometimes concentrate so hard on what they want to say that they become absorbed in their impressive flow of wonderful words instead of talking in everyday language that the reader will understand?

    Take a look at these before and after examples found on the www.plainenglish.co.uk website:

    Before
    If there are any points on which you require explanation or further particulars we shall be glad to furnish such additional details as may be required by telephone.

    After
    If you have any questions please call.

    Before
    High-quality learning environments are a necessary precondition for facilitation and enhancement of the ongoing learning process.

    After
    Children need good schools if they are to learn properly.

    To learn more about how you can do more KISSing (Keep It Short and Simple) follow the link.


    A-Z of Bloopers, Blunders, Common errors and Clichés

    Thanks to everyone who has written to say how much you enjoy my A-Z of Bloopers, Blunders, Common Errors and Clichés. Sorry for not featuring more in the last two newsletters.

    Here are the G's and H's.

    Gobbledegook
    Gobbledegook is writing that is bombastic, pretentious, stuffy and long-winded. It is writing that attempts to sound official or formal. Take a look at this letter from an accountant - it is full of gobbledygook. Can you spot all the long-winded words and phrases, all the gobbledegook?

    Dear Mr Johnson

    We have received your email of even date.

    For the audit of Turner Communications Pte Ltd, kindly furnish us with a copy of the company's balance sheet, expenses statements and all the invoices/bills paid by the holding company at your earliest convenience.

    We will revert to you on the treatment of the intangible assets and the financials of Turner Communications Inc as soon as possible. Should you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact us.

    Best regards
    Bernard Williams

    Goodself
    This is so old-fashioned. Please do not use this word in your writing.

    Grammar
    Too many people still spell this word as grammer. There is no such word as grammer - it's grammar.

    Hereby and Herewith
    These are old-fashioned clichés that we should not use in the 21st Century.

    However
    However - when the meaning is 'nevertheless' - can be used at the beginning, in the middle or at the end of a sentence. It's a good word to help you illustrate a contrast in thought. Note that commas are usually needed. For example:

    I rarely work on weekends. However, last weekend was an exception.

    I rarely work on weekends. Last weekend, however, was an exception.

    I rarely work on weekends. Last weekend was an exception, however.

    When you use however to mean 'in whatever way' or 'to whatever extent', note that it is one word, not two:

    However you advise her, she will do exactly as she pleases.


    Join one of my public workshops

    Do you want to learn more about the A-Z of Bloopers, and more about KISSing - in other words, how to write in a modern, simple and effective way befitting the 21st Century? Then why not do what the participants in this photograph did in March? They all joined one of my public workshops organised by Learner's Choice International.

    In April I'm looking forward to meeting some old and new friends in Singapore at my 2-day workshop Power Up Your Business Writing Skills on 20-21 April. For more details please contact Sam Loo at Learner's Choice on 6376 2018 or visit www.learners-choice.com.


    Last but not least

    Thanks to Marcel Holman from 4Hoteliers.com for his recent message. He said:

    "Yesterday I picked up one of your books (Model Business Letters, Emails and Other Business Documents 6th edition) from Singapore airport and have almost finished it during my flight!! I found it to be extremely helpful, refreshing at times and a great help for my day-to-day business."

    Thanks Marcel - glad you like it!

    PPS: You may reprint this newsletter or forward it to your customers and colleagues. However please keep this copyright and contact information intact:

    Copyright Shirley Taylor 2005. Shirley Taylor is author of several popular books on effective communication and business writing. She lives in Singapore and works as an international trainer, seminar leader, professional writer and conference speaker.


    April News from Shirley

    It was lovely to meet these lovely participants from ABN AMRO Bank Singapore last month in our first 2-day in-house workshop. If you want to attend one of my public workshops, check out my schedule here:

    SHIRLEY'S 2005 SCHEDULE
    OF PUBLIC WORKSHOPS AND CONFERENCES

    Here are the dates of my public workshops in Singapore for 2005. To download the pdf flier, please click on the links. For further details please call Sam Loo from
    Learner's Choice
    on 63762018.

    20-21 April
    Power Up Your Business Writing Skills

    4 May
    Success Skills for Secretaries & Other Support Staff

    11 May
    Energise your E-mail Writing Skills

    15-16 June
    Power Up Your Business Writing Skills

    24 June
    Success Skills for Secretaries & Other Support Staff

    Thanks to these lovely participants for leaving messages on my guest book recently:

    From Joanne Ng, Accounts Supervisor
    Prudential Assurance Co (S) Pte Ltd
    Hi Shirley, It's fun and I've gained a lot attending your workshop. You have made the class so lively and always enjoyable. Wishing you all the best in whatever you do and most importantly... always have fun!!! :)

    Yeo Lee Yong, Accounts Executive
    Golden Village, Singapore

    Dear Shirley, It's fun and fantastic to have attended your workshop. I have learnt many things, though I have just attended only 1st day of a 2-day workshop. I look forward to the 2nd day. It's great to know your wonderful and informative web page. I am interested to receive your monthly newsletters.

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