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Four Point Plan For Structuring Messages - Answers


A

Study these expressions and decide in which part of a message you may find them. Note 1, 2, 3 or 4 in the drop down menu, using the 4 point plan as your guide:

1. Thank you for your letter of 4 August regarding Miss Shania Kaur's application for a post in your company.

1

2. I hope to hear from you soon.

4

3. A discount of 10% will be allowed on all orders.

2

4. Please let me know soon if you are able to speak at our conference.

3

5. I am pleased to inform you that our Crown Prince Suite is available on the dates you mention.

1

6. Our latest catalogue is enclosed and I hope you will find it interesting.

2

7. These goods are in stock and could be delivered within one week of receiving your order.

2

8. Thank you for your help in this matter.

4

9. I am pleased to confirm arrangements for your booking of the Peninsular Suite for your wedding in November.

1

10. I would appreciate confirmation of your terms of payment and delivery dates.

3


B

Take a look at this poor, jumbled up, badly-written e-mail message.

From Harry.Lim@presto.co.my
Date 25:7:03   16:06:29
To shirley@shirleytaylor.com
CC  
Subject Book signing in Malaysia ← Great subject line
Hello Shirley
I hope things are well with you. Introduction
I was pleased to hear that you will be back in Malaysia again in November to hold your seminar on Effective Business Writing. Details
Some bookstores are interested in asking you to do a talk and signing event. I hope you will agree to take part. If so, please let me have some free dates while you are over here. Action
See you soon.
Harry
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