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Great Grandfather LIVES!! - Answers

Here's how the letter should look in 21st Century language:

Dear Mr Tan

YOUR ORDER NUMBER TH 2457

Thank you for your letter of 27 April.

I am very sorry to hear about the mistake made with your order. I have looked into this and found that the mistake happened in the packing section. Unfortunately it was not discovered before the goods were sent to you.

I have arranged for a repeat order to be sent to you today, and I hope this meets your requirements.

Once again, please accept my apologies for the inconvenience caused.

I enclose a copy of our new catalogue and I hope you find it interesting.

Please give me a call soon on 2358272 if you have any questions.

Yours sincerely



JAMES RICHARDSON
Sales Manager

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